When I began to edit my first draft and make improvements I decided, partly from my feedback and partly from experimenting, to have the camera flashes as a running theme throughout the piece, and also use it to introduce opening credits that run throughout the video, instead of just at the end.
Breaking the video up with the credits helped to improve the pace, which then lead to me adding more camera freeze frames in the actual narrative to try and build up more suspense. Showing the audience that the antagonist is nearing in on the protagonist.
Christina Low's AS Media Studies 