When it came down to editing my fourth and final draft I concentrated on the feedback received from the focus group. Specifically on just cleaning it all, making sure that it all runs smoothly and there are no glitches in the sound or with the transitions.
I also extended the length of the credits to make them easier to read, and also by doing so, changed the non-diegetic music sequence at the end so that it is silence when the protagonist turns around. This was one piece of advice in particular that I took on from the focus group.
Christina Low's AS Media Studies 